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A letter from Osgiliath

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Dear Brother,
Today, I saw people caught in the claws of doom,
Hiding their faces behind still masks.
Death was in their eyes, marble white on their lips,
They were brought closer to the River...
The Anduin's bleak banks gave them peace.
Just like the Gondorian arrows did.

Dear Brother,
Today, I saw another face of death.
The one I don't want to see anymore.
Eating forced bodies and unbreakable souls.
It's my first English poem, so don't be too angry at my poor lines;)
Comments wanted, please:)
And big thanks to my friend Vilya, who really helped me with this one :*
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Thank you so much, your words mean really lot for me:)